Persuasive speech: Give 12 yr old kids a part time job

LI: To write a speech that persuades others to think the way that you do.

For the past two weeks we made a persuasive speech that wants to make the audience change their minds when they hear your opinion my speech was about giving 12 yr old kid a part time job so it can help their families. we had to make sure we gave good eye contact to the audience, good expressions to hook your audience to your speech with persuasive language features and either tell your speech to the class or to a small group i told mine to a small group. It was easy to tell the group because it was only a group of three.


SPEECH:

Hi my name is Te Pounamu and i think that people 12 years and over should have a part time job because it can help with different kind of payments in the house and for your clothing and anything else for your family and you. People 12 can have more than 60 jobs . This means that us kids are able to earn money for our families witch can help a lot

People think 12 year old’s shouldn’t have a job because of the saying No debt No sweat but i say different i think that 12 year old kids should have a part time job. It can help with families that are not getting paid properly or don’t get paid at all because they don’t get food on there tables or clothes on their backs or support to their families and their houses

If your were the prime minister would you let families be helpless without food or clothes because if I was the Prime Minister I would let anyone above the age of 11 because it might help wait not it’s going to help the lives of kids parents or their elders because it’s amazingly helpful because it can help with your health and needs.

The reason why I want this to happen is because the families are losing their money because their suffering, damaged and hurt because they're losing their money so we can let the 12 year old kids are earning money because of the money that they earn can provide for their families with food, clothing and bedding, etc. So do you think that 12 year old kids should have a well paid part time job? Because I do.

So please let 12 year old kids have a well paid job that can sustain and stabilize their lives with a House, Food, Clothes and other needs I have lived that life before and it's hash but now i have a part time weekend job that can sustain my families life which helps my family heavily which is what makes me happy providing for my family