Plastic straws, Don’t you think there good because I do, Hi my name is Te pounamu and I think that we should keep the plastic straws because they are harmless they’re only harmful if your lazy and can’t be bothered to get off your back sides and chuck them in the bin or just be smart and reuse them instead of littering. Just reuse them you lazy the new straws that they are making with bamboo, metal and paper are soggy and rusty. Why are we draining money that they could use for health and medical safety because it’s just another thing that we waste time and money instead of using it in a wise way. Plastic straws are polluting the world right but that’s only because we all know we litter because we can’t be bothered.
Why would you want to ban a little piece of plastic just because lazy people can't get up and put them in the bin or even reuse them. Plastic straws, Why are they so harmful they don’t anything to harm us it’s us making it harmful because we just can’t get up and go to the bin
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Hello Te Pounamu
ReplyDeleteOn the second line in the story you should take out the "the" because you don't need it. when you are talking about the new straws you should add they could get rusty. The part when you are talking about spending the money on resources such as medicine and health resources it doesn't make a lot of sense so just make sure you reread that sentence again and make it make sense. Your last sentence is like your previous one it doesn't make sense but you still finish the last sentence. the beginning of your second paragraph is saying the same thing as your first paragraph so you should remove that part of your second paragraph. But beside those small mistakes your story or argument is compelling keep up the good work.