Today i had to write about the panmure bridge school whakatauki, Manaaki Whenua, Care for the land, Manaaki Tangata, Care for the people and Haere Whakamua Go foward.
Hi Te Pounamu, your DLO is very colourful which makes it very easy to read. I like how you said what our whakatauki means and what our school values are. Their are a few problems with your blurb like you used lowercase for 'I' and said 'had to' but besides those minor mistakes it was a great blogpost.
Hi Te Pounamu Great job on completing this task, I really like how you even put our own school logo in. Another thing that I like is how you explained the three different parts of our school's whakatauki. I have a question for you though, was this task easy for you? Or did you have some trouble?
Hi Te Pounamu, your DLO is very colourful which makes it very easy to read. I like how you said what our whakatauki means and what our school values are. Their are a few problems with your blurb like you used lowercase for 'I' and said 'had to' but besides those minor mistakes it was a great blogpost.
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ReplyDeleteGreat job on completing this task, I really like how you even put our own school logo in. Another thing that I like is how you explained the three different parts of our school's whakatauki. I have a question for you though, was this task easy for you? Or did you have some trouble?