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Friday 31 August 2018

Evaluation of my animated story





My animated story is currently under construction. Could you please help me, by giving me some feedback on my conceptual design of my animated story.

3 comments:

  1. Greetings, Te Pounamu.
    I like how you put lots effort into doing this animation, but I am not to sure what this story is about. Although I see you put a lot of effort into it for the last day of digi tech. But maybe you should work on putting a bit more detail into what the story is about. Keep it up.

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  2. Hi Te pounamu
    Your story is great to make your spite bigger so we can see it like people that can't see well they think it is something else than a man in a car and make it longer.

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